Have you thought about the importance of stories and poems of fantasy? Some people might think it is immature or that it's a simply ridiculous thing for children. However, we forget the ability of the human being to imagine and be creative through fables, stories, poems and children's literature which make us dream and create an imaginary world filled with adventure. According to Sigmund Freud, "fantasy is a phenomenon inherent to though, as a mental activity that underlies the play of children and adult art". In my research about Dorothea Barth, the author of the poem "Broken Wings", I found a curious information about her childhood. Barth was born in Amsterdam, and she moved to the United States when she was nine years old. The dictionary soon became her friend, as she sought the meaning of a new and peculiar vocabulary of a language she had never seen in her young life. For that reason, Dorothea Barth loved literature and music, so that Dorothea is currently a recognized freelance writer that combines creative writing and musical talents to create wonderful fantasy poems. I personally chose the poem about fairies because it caught my attention in a way that is written and has a moral factor. In other words, this poem says although we have bad times, there is always someone who can help you to succeed and overcome all the obstacles.
The tone of a poem reflects what the writer wants to express through his writings, and the feelings can be defined. Some possible attitudes are pessimism, optimism, earnestness, seriousness, bitterness, humorous, and joyful. An author's tone can be revealed through choice of words and details. For instance, the writer may want you to believe that the beginning of the poem is in a deep of sadness and great joy at the end like the poem "Broken Wings".
The symbolism could represent a person, place or object which has a meaning in itself but suggests other meanings as well. In the poem "Broken Wings" are some symbolism such as bluer than the bonnets, summer, sky, bluebird, and bloom.
The tone and symbolism are essential part of any poem because they contribute to a better interpretation of the poem, story, or any other type of literature. In "Broken Wings" is easy to see how it reflects the tone and symbolism with metaphors, repetitions of certain words or comparisons that help in a better understanding and to decipher what the meaning of the poem is and what the writer Dorothea Barth really wants to express through her way of writing.
Getting out of the fantasy, this poem teaches us that in spite of that sometimes we do not have the same physical abilities that others will always be a time when we need help from someone and that person could give us this help in a difficult situation without interest. The fairy was having a big trouble without one of her wings, and fortunately she was able to fly again with the support of a mortal, a regular person who did not have the power as a fairy.
06/10/16
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8 comments:
Nice essay. Although I thought the introduction was a little long. Any conclusion?
There is no conclusion. That's the only thing missing. Except from that, everything is good.
The essay is very good but you need to give more examples of what you mean from the poem you read. You need to quote more from the text to get your point across.
Good essay . Agree with Carmen more examples would of been good. Also a conclusion. =X - Other than that good !!
Essay started off really great but towards the ending it became shorter and without a conclusion.good job though
I really liked how you opened your essay with a question and quoted from Sigmund Freud. It really caught my attention and interest. Since I have never read “Broken Wings” and I sure some other people haven’t, I would have liked more descriptions. Where do the symbols of summer, sky, bluebird that you vaguely mention appear in the poem? How does the author set a sad tone in the beginning and end the poem with great joy? Your thesis and structure is clear and reasonable however you are not saying enough. I would like to see you elaborate and expand on presented ideas with details and examples. If you simply add examples and details to support your statements, your piece has the potential to go from average to fantastic. =)
This essay has a phenomenal opening. It is both engaging to the author and it addresses the assignment very well, though I believe it could have used a more clearly stated thesis statement. With that said, I find that the body paragraphs are very lax in supporting details, and since symbolism can largely be a matter of opinion, I don't feel I know what you mean in regards to the poem (how are all the terms used?). The paragraph that you added before the conclusion was well written, but it would be more easy to see with more of these metaphors and repetition of words quoted in your essay. I'm sure your interest in the poem (as mirrored by your strong conclusion) will allow you to find stronger supporting evidence to take this essay to the next level
Caroline, right off the bat, I like how you incorporated an outside quote (Freud), into your essay. I thought your essay was good with a very strong introduction, but should be stretched out a bit more in the tone and symbolism paragraphs.
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